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imjustpicky) wrote2011-10-20 03:09 am
imjustpicky) wrote2011-10-20 03:09 am
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01 - I Believe in Second Chances
[Evenings were coming earlier and getting colder in Onett, but that didn't stop Picky from taking his usual place on the hilltop. The meteor was long-gone, the crater partially filled in and covered with grass, but the place was still... important. He had made sandwiches, bologna with mustard on white bread, and taken them along. Three of them. One for him, two for...
The two always wound up being for him, too. But maybe...
So he ate his sandwich, and watched the sunset, and played with his Game Boy, and waited. When sunset became stars, he watched those, too. And when the temperature took a sudden drop, he pulled his hands into the sleeves of his sweater and wrapped a camping blanket around himself. Tonight... he had a really good feeling about tonight. Tonight, Pokey would come back, and he'd be really happy to have sandwiches waiting for him. Then he'd explain everything. And he'd say that he missed him. And he'd have his big brother back. And things would be better.
Under the sweater and blankets, Picky was warm and cozy and comfortable. Comfortable enough to eventually lie down, curl up, and drift off to sleep.]
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[Locked to household at 7132 Brooks Lane, Morning]
[Picky isn't sure where he is when consciousness starts coming back to him. He's warm, and comfortable, and not outside in the grass all dew-soaked and chilled... which wasn't what he expected, once his thoughts began to gather.
Had someone come and taken him home...? But who would ever bother to do that?
He cracks one eye open, meaning to check the time on his alarm clock, but his alarm clock wasn't there. Or any of his other things. This wasn't his bed. This wasn't his room. Wakefulness is coming back to him, and how. He rubs his eyes, throws aside the blankets, and stumbles across the unfamiliar floor.]
H-hey...?
[The only conclusion he can come to is that he has been KIDNAPPED. Didn't they warn about this sort of stuff on that one day of the year when the police came to school and handed out pamphlets? They totally warned about this sort of stuff. But his kidnapper was dumb. His kidnapper had left a baseball bat in the room. Brandishing it, still in his jammies, he advanced into the household.]
[Phone - Morning]
[The voice on the phone is a whisper.]
Hey. Is this 911? The police? I'm... My name is Picky Minch. I've been kidnapped, and I'm being held hostage by... by really weird people.
They keep calling me "son". They're not my parents. It's creepy, it's really creepy.
[There's a sudden, sharp intake of breath, and then the voice becomes muffled as though someone is holding a hand over the receiver.]
Nothing... I'm not talking to anyone! B-breakfast? I'm... I'm not hungry!
[The line eventually un-muffles. The boy sighs.]
Can you hurry? They're trying to make me eat oatmeal. Yuck!
[Action A - School]
[Despite his protests, Picky's drone mother had handed him a lunch and a book bag and shooed him out the door to go to school. Experience had told him that it was almost always a bad idea to miss school... so even if this wasn't his town? And wasn't his school? What choice did he have but to attend?
So here's the new kid, sitting at his desk, looking slightly stunned. Or in the cafeteria at a table by himself, slightly stunned. Or in the playground off to one side, slightly stunned.
He's still not sure if this is actually happening.]
[Action B - Around Town, Afternoon]
[School is out, and there's this really strange town to explore. So Picky is off exploring it. He's peering in store windows, stepping on crunchy leaves with gusto, staring at the drones as they go about their business.... And shyly avoiding eye-contact with the people that act real-er. The bangs make it pretty easy.]
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W-we can die! I know it! My brother said that people die all the time! But... but that's worse, if you get made like a drone!
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[He's trying to be brave and not scared and jumpy. He has to be brave about this. He takes a deep breath, and holds it, and slowly lets it out...
There's still a frown on his face, though.]
...go home. I.. I guess that's not... so bad.
[He sounds very unconvinced.]
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[He'll try to smile.]
Don't worry, though. There's a lot of people here who will try to protect you. Including me.
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...I-I still don't want to die. I really don't.
[And then, surprise! Surprise that someone would want to protect him. That this kid would want to protect him, too. They only just met! And didn't he know that he was...
...no one knew that he was Picky Minch, with all the baggage that came attached, here, did they?]
You'd really do that?
Really?
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Picky's expression softens into a smile.]
I'll look you for you, too.
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Thanks.
We all need someone to watch over us, in a place like this... Who are you living with, Finch?
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Is that... is that okay? Is it normal? They're not too bad. They tell me what to do, but... well, that's what parents do, right?
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You should find someone who lives nearby who isn't a drone, though, so there's someone you can rely upon.
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[And then he nods rapidly, in full agreement. That's a really good idea!] Yeah! I'll do that. I'll look for someone. I'll check.
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Do you mind if I ask where you live, Finch? If you ever need anything, I'm on 846 Goldberg Street.
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Ah! Yeah, I'm at 7132 Brooks Lane! If you want to come by sometime, that'd... that'd be cool.
[Has he... has he made a friend? He made a friend, didn't he?]
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[He'll think for a second or two.]
I don't think I know anyone there. It might be a newer street that's popped up recently. But sure, of course.
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[He's starting to be a little less incredulous about everything. If they're saying it, these people must be telling the truth...]
Maybe that's why it's just me, there....
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[He's astonished. And determined to keep an eye out for suddenly-appearing buildings, from here out.]
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[Hey, it's starting to get darker, isn't it? Picky looks up at the sky, surprised.]
I.. I should probably get home. I bet there'll be supper ready!
...I hope it's not gross.
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[This does not thrill him at all. Broccoli, maybe he could handle, but not brussels sprouts.]
...if they're pretty good at being normal, I should try to be normal, too. To... behave. Right? So I shouldn't be out too late! Right?
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That's mostly up to you. Actually, this might be the first time you've ever had so much freedom, right? Nothing they say really matters since they're not... really people, but you can do what you think is best.
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I... guess? I dunno. I could do almost anything I wanted, if I came home in time and wasn't noisy...
[He knew that wasn't really how it should have been. That was wrong, and this place was somehow wrong, too.]
...will they hit me? If I'm bad enough?
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...The drones are violent sometimes, but only when the town tells them to attack us. You'll be able to tell when that's happening - get out of the house if it does.
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[This is not a kid with a good home life. But maybe he'll test the limits of his new parents a little more....]
If they do, I'll get right out! Yeah! That's part of the scary stuff here, right? I'll run! I'll hide!
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